Friday, April 2, 2010

Identify the errors

Sentences
1. I think live in the countryside is better than live in the city.
2. It is because the river in the countryside are not polluted.
3. They are not like the people in the city that always mind their own business.
4. The air are clean.
5. I agree with Zainal that live in the countryside is better.
6. I want to say that live in the countryside is more better.
7. We can living with healthy lives.
8. I am agree with Zainal.


Sentences
1. Children that live in the village
2. His works is collect rubbish.
3. He likes eat.
4. His job is collect rubbish.
5. Pak Manan walking near a river.
6. The children swimming and splashed water at Pak Manan.
7. When they saw Pak Manan collects rubbish…
8. Pak Manan walk along the beach and saw a few children are swimming near the sea.
9. The kids called he a crazy man.
10. One evening, he saw the children was swimming.
11. He heard someone scream for help.
12. His name is a Pak Manan.
13. In Serdang Village, have a one person that the villagers called him crazy.
14. He very poor and his shirt very dirty.
15. Children splashed water at Pak Manan and he wet.


Sentences
1. After ten minutes later, Pak Manan heard one girl scream for help.
2. Pak Manan was collects rubbish at river.
3. Pak Manan is not have money.
4. The children was called her a crazy m an.
5. At there , we have fresh air.
6. At city, we not have fresh air because have smoke from factory-factory at city.
7. There also have many thing to do such swimming at river, fishing and do outdoor games activities.
8. They continued splashed water to Pak Manan.
9. Pak Mananheard a children scream help.
10. Child at the Kampung Senawang dislikes Pak Manan.
11. We will calling him with nickname Pak Manan crazy.
12. He not angry.
13. While Pak Manan passing the road.
14. When they see Pak Manan walking at the banbk river collects rubbish, they splash water at him.
15. After the accident, they did not called Pak Manan crazy; anymore.
16. He like to collect the rubbish, cans.
17. Everyone in his village he crazy.
18. When we have many times, we can jogging and swimming.



Transitional Devices

addition again, also, and, and then, besides, equally important, finally, first, further, furthermore, in addition, in the first place, last, moreover, next, second, still, too
comparison also, in the same way, likewise, similarly
concession granted, naturally, of course
contrast although, and yet, at the same time, but at the same time, despite that, even so, even though, for all that, however, in contrast, in spite of, instead, nevertheless, notwithstanding, on the contrary, on the other hand, otherwise, regardless, still, though, yet
emphasis certainly, indeed, in fact, of course
example or
illustration after all, as an illustration, even, for example, for instance, in conclusion, indeed, in fact, in other words, in short, it is true, of course, namely, specifically, that is, to illustrate, thus, truly
summary all in all, altogether, as has been said, finally, in brief, in conclusion, in other words, in particular, in short, in simpler terms, in summary, on the whole, that is, therefore, to put it differently, to summarize
time sequence after a while, afterward, again, also, and then, as long as, at last, at length, at that time, before, besides, earlier, eventually, finally, formerly, further, furthermore, in addition, in the first place, in the past, last, lately, meanwhile, moreover, next, now, presently, second, shortly, simultaneously, since, so far, soon, still, subsequently, then, thereafter, too, until, until now, when

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